A Promising Start (Sherlock)

[morganstuart]

Title: A Promising Start
Author: Morgan Stuart
Fandom: Sherlock
Disclaimer: This universe does not belong to me; I'm just an appreciative visitor. I make no profit from this fan work.
Description: She could learn a great deal from this man: what not to do, of course, but also what to do.
Historian's Note: This takes place approximately three years prior to the events depicted in the Sherlock episode "A Study in Pink."
Author's Note: This is comprised of two parts, each a 221b ficlet (221 words, the last beginning with "b").




PART 1: A 221b Ficlet

She sat in his office, waiting. Apparently the workday began when he felt like it.

Promising start, this.

A few minutes later he appeared in a weary whirlwind, rumpled and stubbled and laden with hard-copy files. She realised he must've been at the office for hours already that morning. Perhaps he'd never made it home.

"Sorry I'm late." He deposited his armload onto the desk and scrubbed fingers through his hair, bringing new chaos to old disorder. "Glad you're here."

"Thanks, Sir."

"Don't thank me yet." A rueful, sideways grin. "Give you the bad news first, shall I?"

No pause for a reply. "I'm proud of my team. We do good work. But on the toughest cases, when time's of the essence, I sometimes bring in a consulting detective. My methods aren't always—"

Appreciated? Wise? Legal?

"—popular. My call. My responsibility."

So that's why he's DI Lestrade, not DCI, at his age.

"I'm good at questioning suspects and witnesses, talking to victims' families. But I'm rubbish at press conferences."

With a face like that?

"Your record's impressive. I'll rely on your PR expertise."

Huh.

He stifled a yawn. "God, I need a cuppa."

Here it comes...

"Be right back." Already he was halfway to the door. "Fancy tea? Coffee?"

Sally Donovan smiled.

Promising start, after all.

"Coffee, please. Black."


PART 2: A 221b Ficlet

"There may be jokes, at first." Lestrade sipped his coffee, then grimaced.

"Jokes?"

"'Middle-aged, lonely DI needs a new sergeant, and lookit, she's a beautiful young thing. How convenient.'

"I don't foresee you getting any less attractive or me any less alone," he continued without apology or, apparently, self-pity. "I can ignore 'em if you can."

Frankness was a trait Sally valued. She repaid it in kind.

"There'll be other talk, too," she countered. "'Whose arse is he trying to kiss, requesting a woman, and a black one, at that? Playing some political angle. Only explanation.'"

"People can be right bastards."

This startled a laugh from her.

"Your answer to that," he said, "is doing your job, letting your record speak for itself."

"And yours?"

"I need someone at my right hand I can rely on." No hesitation. "I researched the candidates. Did the only thing I could, didn't I? I asked for the best."

He means it.

The higher-ups might've had issues with Lestrade and his decisions, but rumour had it that his team members, past and present, considered any slights against him to be instant fighting words.

She could learn a great deal from this man: what not to do, of course, but also what to do.

"I'm honoured to join your team, Sir."

Let 'em talk, the bastards.


THE END

Vital Stats: Originally written in November 2011.

Originally written for this prompt at sherlockbbc_fic.

Comments

[thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com]

This is lovely, seeing Lestrade from Donovan's point of view. I particularly like the way he challenges her pre-conceptions from the beginning.

[list-of-lists.livejournal.com]

These are both lovely. I especially liked He deposited his armload onto the desk and scrubbed fingers through his hair, bringing new chaos to old disorder. and The higher-ups might've had issues with Lestrade and his decisions, but rumour had it that his team members, past and present, considered any slights against him to be instant fighting words. She could learn a great deal from this man: what not to do, of course, but also what to do.

[maggie-conagher.livejournal.com]

Most 221B's leave me feeling a bit unfulfilled but these were perfect, little snapshots, moments of getting acquainted. So vivid that I felt like I had watched them instead of read them.

This is a different voice for you, versatile you.

Thank you!

[shaindyl.livejournal.com]

These were great. I especially loved the line "new chaos to old disorder". And I'm glad to see that Sally isn't blind to the man in front of her ("...with a face like that?" *snerk*) And I loved how she expected him to ask her to get the tea/coffee and ended up doing it himself. You nailed both characterisations here - the world-weary DI on the one hand and the up-and-coming but defensive young sargeant on the other. Great work and thanks for posting!

[cookiefleck.livejournal.com]

Very interesting idea on your part to consider what their first meeting would have been like. Always a hint of sadness in your Lestrade, and he wears it well.

[sc010f.livejournal.com]

:D

This isi so perfect - and so headcanon now.

I love your Sally!

[hardboiledbaby]

Always so excited to see a new story from you, and, as always, you do not disappoint. Lovely fleshing out of these characters. :)

[monkeybard]

That was a lovely snack of ficcage with beautiful insights and characterisations.

[eanor.livejournal.com]

Oh, I liked this a lot! Especially loved the first one where all Sally's prejudices are turned upside down! :) What a great start for those two, I can really envision this in the series!

[brighteyed-jill.livejournal.com]

Oh my goodness I love your Lestrade so much. I love how honest he is: straightforward about his weaknesses, frank about possible roadblocks, and perfectly comfortable with sharing the reasons he chose Sally. Seeing Sally's expectations be subverted is great.

[goldvermilion87.livejournal.com]

I love it!

And this phrase--"bringing new chaos to old disorder"--Brilliant!

[litlover12.livejournal.com]

Very nice!

[arnie1967.livejournal.com]

Ooh, I like these! I like Lestrade anyway, and I think there's a lot more to Sally than we've seen. I really like how Sally kept on being a little bit wrong about Lestrade. :oD

Thanks for sharing!

[methylviolet10b]

You know I adore your Lestrade, and this view into the beginning of his working relationship with Donovan, the man he was then, the woman she was, the wariness and wearyness and humor - it's just fantastic. Stellar. My only complaint is that there isn't more. ;-) Brava!

[noirrosaleen.livejournal.com]

This is going to sound slightly ridiculous, but -

Earlier I had a mini-meltdown over my stats class (I am Not Doing Well, for many reasons), and I hopped on my LJ app to see if there was anything new. I saw this - saw YOU wrote it, thought twice - and read it anyway.

I was pleasantly surprised to get warm fuzzies instead of an excuse for my tears. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

(This does not excuse you from future heart-breaking expectations. I AM ALWAYS ON MY GUARD, SHAN YU. Oh, and I'm wearing my Blue Sun shirt today. ^_^)

[outofmymind.livejournal.com]

Good thing she didn't meet Sherlock before that interview or all the offers of coffee in the world wouldn't have made that job appealing. :-) This is lovely. You've packed a lot into these two little ficlets.

[innie_darling]

I've thought about it, and realized I could not actually love this any more than I already do.

[capt-facepalm.livejournal.com]

I have long maintained that the secondary characters are one of the best tools for exploring the major characters. And you, dear author, are among the best at doing just that! Well done!

[mazaher.livejournal.com]

Oh, thanks! Lestrade at his best (...but is there a time in your stories when he isn't?) and great Donovan. (You know, she often reminds me of Jamie Lee Curtis in Bigelow's Blue Steel, 1990). She deserves Lestrade's support, and it's so good to see them working together. Such bosses are dishearteningly rare in the so-called RL, whatever the line of work.

[morganstuart.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! I'm really tickled that you liked it.

I particularly like the way he challenges her pre-conceptions from the beginning.

I'm so glad this worked for you. I loved imagining that he would turn all of her (somewhat understandable) assumptions about him upside down and win her loyalty in the process.

Thanks for your kind words!

[morganstuart.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad you enjoyed these ficlets!

Thank you for telling me what lines you liked most. That's so helpful! I'm smitten by the idea of Lestrade drawing fire from his superiors but fierce loyalty from his team. I tend to think that a lot of Donovan's hostility toward Sherlock comes from her protectiveness of Lestrade.

I appreciate your reading and commenting very much.

[morganstuart.livejournal.com]

I am so thrilled by your kind words. I'm really pleased these ficlets seemed vivid and visual to you!

As you noted, I'm experimenting in style. *blushes* It means a lot to hear that this worked. You're so kind and supportive, and I appreciate it more than you can know. Thank you!

[rusty-armour.livejournal.com]

Words alone cannot convey how much I love these ficlets! You've done an excellent job capturing both voices, especially Lestrade's. I really like the way you work in little details about their characters that were hinted at in "A Study in Pink," such as Lestrade being rubbish at press conferences. *g*

It's great the way Lestrade is able to surprise and impress Donovan, though I think she gets some great lines in there as well. I admire this exchange in particular:

"There'll be other talk, too," she countered. "'Whose arse is he trying to kiss, requesting a woman, and a black one, at that? Playing some political angle. Only explanation.'"

"People can be right bastards."

This startled a laugh from her.

"Your answer to that," he said, "is doing your job, letting your record speak for itself."

With these scenes you really get a sense of how this partnership was built. There was obviously respect and equality there from the very beginning.

[morganstuart.livejournal.com]

Oh, I'm so glad you liked these! It's great to know what worked, so I appreciate your pointing out specific lines and ideas.

I'm glad to see that Sally isn't blind to the man in front of her

LOL! Who could miss that much gorgeousness? *wink*

I'm especially tickled that the bit with the tea/coffee worked for you. I had fun imagining him undoing all her expectations, one by one, without even knowing it.

You nailed both characterisations here - the world-weary DI on the one hand and the up-and-coming but defensive young sargeant on the other.

This absolutely makes my day! Your lovely descriptions of them here capture exactly what I was shooting for. This makes me so happy! You've put a huge grin on my face. Thank for reading and for your kind and encouraging comments. They mean a lot to me.

[morganstuart.livejournal.com]

Aw, thank you! I saw the prompt and I couldn't resist it. I'm glad to hear that Lestrade works for you here. I loved the idea of seeing his practicality and world-weariness through Donovan's eyes, especially as he undoes all of her expectations. As always, thank you so much for reading and commenting! I really appreciate it.