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Title: Everything You Know I Haven't Got, Part 4
Author: Morgan Stuart
Fandom: Sherlock
Disclaimer: This universe does not belong to me; I'm just an appreciative visitor. I make no profit from this fan work.
Description: When the media declares open season on Greg Lestrade, the hunt begins.
Historian's Note: This takes place during the Great Hiatus.
Warnings (Highlight to Read): Assumed character death and, in later segments, depictions of violence, torture, attempted murder, and injuries
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Read Part 3



John braced himself on the ceramic sink and watched the water circle the drain and disappear. Now and then drops that he'd splashed on his face would fall and join the exiting flow. He had scrubbed his hands and forearms to a bright, raw pink, but he fancied that Greg Lestrade's blood and vomit continued to cling to him, as tenacious as the man himself.

Evidence that the recent hours were reality rather than nightmare.

They would, of course, transform into nightmare soon enough. John had no doubt that his subconscious had just added several new terrors to its already impressive repertoire, and they would revisit him when the nights were darkest and he was most alone.

He rolled his shoulders and stretched his neck as he sought to fit the sharp-edged fragments of the early morning together into something like a linear narrative.

He recalled hearing gunfire and shouting. He'd thrown himself forward to shield Lestrade at the same time he'd drawn his pistol. One of Mycroft's people had thought quickly enough to disengage the floodlight trained on them; that had made them far less of an easy target, but it also had left them smothered in profound darkness.

He recalled the muffled impact as another team member had met the immovable object of Mycroft Holmes and failed to guide his long form into a protective crouch. He recalled the hush of Mycroft's call for a report and the coldness of his instructions to use whatever force was necessary to contain the threat.

Most clearly of all, John recalled a choked sound of distress and "Godhelpme," the brutal retching as Lestrade once again had been sick, the feel of convulsions under his night-blind hands as that tortured body had tried to wrench itself apart.

After that, Lestrade could not be coaxed back to proper awareness. The only coherent words he'd spoken were a weak, "Notyourfault, John... 'msorry." John couldn't even be sure for what failure Lestrade was extending pardon or holding himself accountable.

John had answered with his heart: "It's not your fault either, Greg. None of it. And I'm sorry, too. Now stay with me, all right? Don't you dare give up now."

More shouts and another volley of gunfire had echoed across the countryside, devoid of any clues as to distance or direction. Then the thunder of an approaching helicopter had drowned all other noise. John's entire universe had collapsed to the scale of Lestrade's next heartbeat, next breath, next second of life.

Now John stared into the draining water and felt... nothing. And far too much.

It took him a moment – or was it minutes? – to realise that another man had entered the lavatory. John looked up into the mirror and found Mycroft's reflection returning his gaze.

"Is there news?" John asked as he turned off the tap.

"No, he's still in surgery," Mycroft said, and he held out a neatly stacked bundle. "My personal assistant took the liberty of visiting your new flat. She thought you might appreciate a change of clothing."

John glanced down at himself and grimaced. "Oh, God, yes. Ta very much."

He didn't question how Mycroft already appeared freshly shaved, washed, and dressed in what was obviously a newly-laundered suit. John didn't think he could handle the larger mysteries of the universe just then.

Anthea's choices for him brought an unexpected tightness to John's throat. His earth-toned plaid shirt, well-worn jeans, and oatmeal jumper: they were among his favourites, his wardrobe's equivalent of "comfort food." Somehow, she'd known.

"That was most kind of her," he added, touched.

"She said wasn't paid enough to go through your pants," Mycroft said with a cryptic non-smile of the Mona Lisa sort. "Feel free to take that however you choose."

"Um." John blinked. "Right."

He cleared his throat and deposited the clothes on the counter.

"I believe I owe some of your people an apology," he began.

Mycroft turned his head on one side in mute enquiry.

"On the helicopter. I think for a time things were... a bit not good." He turned, clasped his now-steady hands behind his back, and met Mycroft's eyes as if he were facing a firing squad. "You asked me to come with you because you thought I could help, but instead I put everyone in danger."

"I asked you to come with me because I believed you could save Greg Lestrade's life," Mycroft returned. "And you did."

"What I mean is—"

"John. Do give me and mine some credit." Mycroft peered down his nose at him as he tapped the tip of his umbrella on the tile floor. "You'd been taken in the midnight hours to an unfamiliar outdoor location, only to be rescued from gunfire via medical transport, complete with a critically wounded patient under your care; given your background and experience, some disorientation was only to be expected."

He punctuated his words with pursed lips. "It mattered not one whit whether you thought the helicopter was headed for London or Kandahar; what mattered was that you knew who Lestrade was and what treatment he required. Which you did. At all times.

"If you'd presented a danger, you can be assured that my professionals would've handled it. On the contrary, according to the reports I received, they followed your lead because your expertise and abilities quite obviously exceeded their own. They credit your singular skill as the sole reason Lestrade arrived here alive. As do I."

Turning his face away as if in revulsion, Mycroft added, "Now do get out of those clothes. You look like a butcher escaped from a nineteenth-century penny dreadful."

John swallowed, absorbing the compliment hidden inside the scolding.

"Yeah, well," he mumbled as he peeled off his shirt, "I knew it wasn't a proper flashback. Not enough corpses."

Eyes primly averted, Mycroft rocked in his Italian shoes. "Oh, but there are corpses at the end of this story, John." His words were toneless and precisely enunciated. "However you're not the one responsible for them, in any sense of the term."

Stripped to his vest, John found new crimson stains on his skin that wanted cleaning. "What the hell happened out there?"

Mycroft didn't answer immediately. "The two youngest Carlsons – the ones you saw on the film – were given Lestrade's 'hit' as a kind of coming-of-age test. Which, it goes without saying, they spectacularly failed. The younger of the two desired a trophy of his first kill, but the syndicate denied him. It's not part of the Carlson signature, he was told; for that matter, carving bits off of Lestrade might've caused him to bleed out too quickly and ruin the overall effect."

John grimaced, stepping out of his soiled jeans.

"The gunfire you heard was the two of them returning to the scene against orders to collect that memento. And encountering our resistance." Mycroft swivelled, and his eyes found John's in the mirror. "The younger had every intention of performing an amateur castration on Lestrade in order to have a souvenir fit to keep in a jar. As proof of his own criminal prowess."

"Dear God." John shuddered. "They admitted it?"

Mycroft's face was blank. "Let's just say the older of the two survived his compatriot and partner in crime by several very informative minutes."

John closed his eyes as he shrugged into his jumper.

For some moments they said nothing.

"If you're readying some lecture about due process, about the ethics of my serving as judge and jury and executioner, please unburden yourself now." Mycroft inspected his nails. "I expect I'll be busy later."

"How old were they?" John asked.

"Does it matter?"

"I'd like to know."

"The law calls them minors, though only just. Their family hoped to call them men." In a softer voice, yet still without inflection, "I think we would agree they were old enough to know not to stab and whip and beat and kick a man to the point of death."

"Yes," John said. He opened his mouth, closed it again, and then repeated, "Yes."

He stared at the haphazard pile of sodden clothing he'd created.

"Some of the bravest people I've ever met," John said haltingly after a time, "have put their lives on the line all over the world to fight for the rule of law. To fight against men who've wielded the kind of arbitrary and unaccountable power you seem to have. Men who kidnap. Interrogate. Make people disappear."

He shook his head, still studying the blood-soaked fabric at his feet. "I'm not always comfortable with what you do, and I'm not sure I'll ever be. But I know without a doubt that due process is currently failing a truly good man, and today you saved him." John gave a noncommittal huff. "God knows I'm not going to lose any sleep over the bloody Carlsons. I was prepared to shoot them myself to defend us."

Crouching to gather his clothes, he ran a hand over his face. "Y'know, I honestly didn't get the fact you two were 'allies.'" He gave the word ironic weight and quotation marks with his fingers. "You and Greg."

"I'm sorry if you think less of him now." John recognised Mycroft's biting tone from former petty squabbles with Sherlock.

"No, I don't," John said quietly. "I think more of you, actually."

Mycroft made no reply.

When John rose, Mycroft glanced at the cast-off clothing and then threw a pointed look toward an oversized rubbish bin. With a nod, John binned the pile.

"Dare I ask where we are?" John said. "I have no idea. This doesn't look like any hospital I've ever seen in London. Or, you know, anywhere."

"It's somewhere safe," Mycroft said. "Leave it at that for the present."

"And you'd stake your life on that? That it's safe?"

"My life and yours. And Lestrade's." Mycroft was drawing intricate, invisible patterns on the tiles with the tip of his umbrella.

"For how long?"

"As long as needed."

"And you said you didn't have unlimited resources."

"I don't." A brief Cheshire-Cat grin. "There are times, however, when I have access to those who do."

John snorted. Then he sobered.

"It was a very close thing, Mycroft. He nearly haemorrhaged to death. One organ ruptured, two more punctured. A man doesn't heal from that overnight. And his hands: he'll be helpless until his fingers heal. That won't only be a horror all its own for a man as self-sufficient as Greg; it will be dangerous. He'll be more vulnerable than he's ever been."

"Mmmm, my concerns exactly." Mycroft continued working his umbrella along the tiles. "Suitable arrangements will have to be made.

"For example" – there was a studied nonchalance to Mycroft's words – "I have a spare room that would be available for the short term, in a home well guarded around the clock by trained security forces. More than one room, as a matter of fact, should Lestrade need someone with medical expertise nearby for those first critical weeks after he's been released, someone who wasn't… settled… elsewhere. I may not be in London or even in the country the entire time, but I wouldn't need to be, would I?"

"I'll – right, yes," John managed. "An arrangement like that... it might be workable. In the short term. Um. Something to keep in mind."

"Yes, do that."

"And what happens next? With the Yard's investigation? His hearing?"

"A bridge we will cross when we must. Perhaps we can use this attack as leverage against the Met. Perhaps new evidence will come to light before the question is ripe. Or perhaps it would be safer for all concerned if the wider world, temporarily at least, believed that Greg Lestrade perished at the Carlsons' hands."

"What? Fake his own death?" John was shocked at the thought.

An elegant shrug. "It's been done." Then, with a smirk, "Tedious man that he is, Lestrade no doubt will want to be a part of any discussion about the details of his future."

"How dare he."

After a beat, John added, "Mycroft, what I said earlier, when you came to the flat, about not being your minion anymore–"

"You've never been my minion, John. I'm keenly aware of the fact." Mycroft ceased his invisible etching. As John finger-combed his hair into order before the mirror, the elder Holmes lurked by the wall like a disconcertingly benevolent gargoyle, hands folded before him and anchored on the handle of his umbrella.

"Right. Well. If you call on me in the future, that is, in the long term..." He sighed. "I won't shut the door in your face. At least without hearing you out first. But save the showing-up-on-my-doorstep routine for true emergencies, like this one." He turned, crossed his arms, and thrust out his chin. "Otherwise, you can just phone me. On my phone."

Mycroft nodded. "Understood."


EPILOGUE

In the corner of the room, Mycroft Holmes angled his BlackBerry just so, took a digital photo, and sent it on its circuitous and encrypted way. The number to which he forwarded the image would be changed within the next thirty-six hours; the recipient it represented was identified only by the title "Unknown Caller" in Mycroft's list of contacts.

The picture he'd taken revealed two men. Ordinary. Dull. Altogether remarkable.

The one reclined in the bed was grey-faced and silver-haired and attached to an alarming number of tubes and wires, but he was breathing on his own, finally in recovery after the last of a marathon of surgeries. The other man curled in a chair by his side, head tilted back and mouth hanging open in exhausted sleep.

The photo offered proof of life.

Vulnerable life. Life currently in Mycroft's charge.

The phone vibrated in Mycroft's hand. The text read, "The room is secure?"

Mycroft typed, "My own handpicked guards stand watch. Only MH, MrsH & a few of my staff know who is here. When he can be moved safely, they'll both be taken to a secure location."

John's head shifted slightly and found another position. The fingers on his left hand flexed open and then closed into a fist. His snores devolved into snuffles.

Another text followed: "I will send the Carlsons a message."

"I was under the impression I already had," Mycroft replied.

"It's worth repeating," came the response.

Lestrade made a soft growl of complaint and frowned in what was obviously less-than-peaceful slumber, rocking a heavily-bandaged hand.

Mycroft stepped closer to the bed and rested his fingertips on the blanket beside Lestrade's feet. He remained frozen there until the man sighed and descended back into drugged oblivion.

"The more names you add to your list, the longer you delay your return," Mycroft noted in his next message. "I will handle this." He couldn't resist adding, "It's not always about you."

The reply was abrupt: "Yes it is."

Attached to this text was a grainy photo obviously taken from a distance as daylight surrendered to dusk. Mycroft narrowed his eyes. The older of the two men on the hotel balcony, stocky and florid-faced and cradling a bottle between meaty hands, was Jay Carlson, the patriarch of the Carlson clan.

The slender man at his side leaning a hip against the railing was at least a generation younger, with a mild, boyish face that easily could have shifted from bland to quite fetching, given the right context. His slight smile in the picture, however, was as unsettling as his dark eyes were cold. Mycroft knew this man used many names. One was Sebastian Moran.

"I see," Mycroft typed, after a heartbeat's pause at the revelation. "Do as you will. You always do anyway. But be careful."

"You should worry about L & J. I'm holding you responsible for their safety."

Mycroft glanced up at the two. They held rare distinctions, these empty-handed refugees from the natural disaster known as Jim Moriarty, whether they knew it or not. They had Sherlock's true concern, and they had Mycroft's absolute trust.

Of course, they had paid for both. Dearly and repeatedly. Greg Lestrade had nearly given his life's blood this day.

Mycroft's word – in this case at least – was his bond. He texted, "I will."

And he would. Constantly.

They were, after all, his allies.


THE END

Note: The title refers to the lyrics "If I could only give you everything/You know I haven't got./I couldn't have one conversation/If it wasn't for the lies,/And still I ought to tell you everything..." from the song "Bad Reputation" by Freedy Johnston, which I find very evocative of the mood of the Great Hiatus.

Vital Stats: Originally written in January 2013.

Originally written for this prompt at [livejournal.com profile] sherlockbbc_fic.

Date: 2013-01-04 05:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc010f.livejournal.com
You have sent me plummeting into the depths of profanity: fuckinghell this is brilliant. Evocative, and so fucking true, for all of them. Gah.

*standing ovation*

Date: 2013-01-05 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
*flails* Thanks a million for this, my friend! I'm so grateful for your support and encouragement all the way through this piece. It's meant a lot to me. I'm thrilled to hear that this ending rang true. *hugs you*

Date: 2013-01-04 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] treksnoopy.livejournal.com
This is exceptional!

Date: 2013-01-05 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you for this! I'm delighted that you enjoyed it.

Date: 2013-01-04 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mazaher.livejournal.com
Whew. What a ride. And it sounds like there's more to come...
Thank you for the brief, to-the-point mention of the ethics involved. I like the way the question is posed, and the fact that it leaves the matter open to more than one choice.
Thank you, very much.

Date: 2013-01-06 02:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for this!

I conceived of this as a one-shot story, actually, so I didn't mean to tease anything that isn't going to appear. Apologies! But, hey, it's always lovely to know there might be interest in more. Never say never, and all that.

It really did my heart good to hear that you liked the way John and Mycroft danced around and engaged the ethics issue. It felt like one of those proverbial elephants in the middle of the room, and I suspected Mycroft would be well aware that it would be on John's mind. I appreciate your commenting about that very much.

Thank you, truly!

Date: 2013-01-04 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kitmerlot1213.livejournal.com
I know that I already posted a review on A03, but man, do I love this fic! I love the obvious bond between Mycroft and Greg and I love the idea that Mycroft is going to continue looking out for Greg and John both--Sherlock would expect it but Mycroft considers them both allies so I think he'd watch out for them regardless.

Truly lovely work on this fic :)

Date: 2013-01-08 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Oh, I can't thank you enough for your wonderful feedback!

I'm so glad the Mycroft-Greg relationship works for you here. I agree with you that Mycroft likely would watch out for both of these "allies" even without Sherlock asking him to do so.

You've put such a huge smile on my face. :D Thank you!


Date: 2013-01-04 08:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thesmallhobbit.livejournal.com
I had to read this as soon as I saw it was posted. And then I had to read it again later to take in everything that you'd written. John's thoughts and conversation with Mycroft are so realistic, and his realisation that the events will add to his nightmares makes so much sense.

And the epilogue where Mycroft assures Sherlock that he will look after the two of them; as he watches them with rather more care than he might admit, is such a great ending.

Date: 2013-01-08 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much!!!

John's thoughts and conversation with Mycroft are so realistic

This makes me soooo happy (and relieved!). Mycroft is a challenge for me, but I really wanted these two to have a meeting of the minds/psyches/moral perspectives. I'm so glad it seemed realistic. I'm also thrilled to hear John's thoughts - including his realisation that this night would play a role in his future nightmares - made sense.

And the epilogue where Mycroft assures Sherlock that he will look after the two of them; as he watches them with rather more care than he might admit, is such a great ending.

This makes my day! Thank you. I'm so glad that it came through that Mycroft was showing more care there than he'd want Sherlock (or anyone else) to realise. :)

Thank you so much for your support and encouragement throughout this story. I really appreciate it!

Date: 2013-01-04 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ascendant-angel.livejournal.com
I very much enjoyed all of this and it's ending, which I partially like because it's real for lack of a better term, Lestrade isn't magically healed and there is still danger out there but for now everyone is safe and things are at least on the right track.

I also like John insisting to know how old the Carlson brothers were, but admitting he would have killed them himself if he'd had too.

Date: 2013-01-08 11:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much for this!

I'm so grateful to hear that this felt real. I love how you described this "there is still danger out there but for now everyone is safe" moment; that's exactly what I was hoping to convey. There's no miracle solution for this situation, but things end in a better place than they began, with these amazing characters pulling together to care for each other.

It means a lot to know that John's moral compass here made sense, and it seemed in character that he wanted to know how old the Carlson youths were, even as he acknowledged that he was willing to kill them to protect his friends. I'm really fascinated by the tension between the doctor and soldier in John's heart/soul, and I was hoping to give a nod to that by making this a grey area, not a clear black-white distinction.

I'm so grateful to you for reading this and leaving such encouraging feedback. Many, many thanks!

Date: 2013-01-04 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mazarin221b.livejournal.com
Absolutely brilliant, stark and true and frightening. Excellent work, and it's nice to read your words again.

Date: 2013-01-08 11:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Oh, what a lovely thing to say! Thank you so much. I'm thrilled that this felt "stark and true and frightening." I've missed this fandom and 'verse so much, and I'm grateful to you for your kindness and encouragement!

Date: 2013-01-05 12:12 am (UTC)
ext_8892: (Lonely Watson (madmanc))
From: [identity profile] beledibabe.livejournal.com
As always, you have me checking beneath the furniture for ghosts and ghouls and things that go bump in the night! I would love it if you would write a novel-length story -- I'd buy it in a second! This story gave me shivers and a profound sense of satisfaction -- the characters are perfect. Bravissima!

(And I have a favor to ask. Would you be interested in reading a young adult fantasy/pulp story mashup we're publishing next month with a view to a blurb? Email me at carla.coupe@wildsidepress.com if so.)

Date: 2013-01-08 11:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
As always, you have me checking beneath the furniture for ghosts and ghouls and things that go bump in the night!

Gah! You've thrilled me here. I appreciate this so much.

This story gave me shivers and a profound sense of satisfaction -- the characters are perfect.

Oh, thank you!!! This gives me great joy. I'm so, so glad that this seemed in character to you. I'm grateful to you for your kindness, as always, my friend.

Date: 2013-01-05 01:07 am (UTC)
catko: (Sherlock 2)
From: [personal profile] catko
I already babbled about this when it was an anon comment fic on the kinkmeme, but I like how you've recrafted it here, with the more depth and detail. And I haven't forgotten the interchange we had there, where I said
"I kind of hanker to see their household set up after this" and you replied:

Oh gosh: stubbornrecovery!Lestrade, medicalBAMF!John, and scaryprotective!Mycroft. I can only imagine. That's quite a potent combination! :)

I still want to see this! AND fussyworriedfrustrated!Sherlock, trying to caretake and scold from afar.

*keeps hoping*

Date: 2013-01-08 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you for this! I'm thrilled that you like how I've revised and expanded this here. I'm so grateful to you for being so encouraging on the meme. This quite literally wouldn't have happened without you.

I originally conceived of this as a stand-alone story, but you do paint a most compelling picture... It's great to know there's interest in more. I definitely don't rule out writing more (and of course I'd be thrilled if anyone else wanted to jump in, too). Never say never, right?

Thanks again for your kindness! I appreciate it so much.

Date: 2013-01-05 01:41 am (UTC)
monkeybard: (roseinwinter)
From: [personal profile] monkeybard
Brava! *applauds* Really, what more is there to say that's not been said above? Excellent!

Date: 2013-01-08 11:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much for this! I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. I appreciate your kind words.

Date: 2013-01-05 02:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-first-chibi.livejournal.com
Wow. I mean, wow. This was amazing, all around. And I almost lasted the whole way without crying, but the epilogue got me!

Brilliantly done!

Date: 2013-01-08 11:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much!!! What a lovely thing to say!

It means a lot to me to hear that the epilogue moved you to tears. *hugs you*

I really appreciate your kind and encouraging feedback. Thanks again!

Date: 2013-01-05 03:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] obscuriglobus.livejournal.com
Brilliant :)

Date: 2013-01-08 11:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm thrilled that you think so. Thank you very much!

Date: 2013-01-05 04:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imachar.livejournal.com
Oh boy, that was just brilliant...so raw and painful for all of them in different ways, and not magically all okay at the end, more stress for Mycroft, more pain for Lestrade, more nightmares for John...and more "cleaning up" for Sherlock....beautifully done.

Date: 2013-01-08 11:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Thank you so very much for this. I'm so delighted that this worked for you.

I love how you describe the lingering complications from this scenario, "more stress for Mycroft, more pain for Lestrade, more nightmares for John...and more 'cleaning up' for Sherlock"... So true. I have a soft spot for stories that aren't wrapped up with a bow at the conclusion, and it means a lot that the lingering fall-out here struck the right note.

I'm most grateful to you for your encouraging and kind words here. Thank you, truly!

Date: 2013-01-05 11:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kamelionwriter.livejournal.com
Perfect characterization, and perfect ending!

Date: 2013-01-08 11:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm delighted that you think so. Thank you very much!

Date: 2013-01-06 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zauzat.livejournal.com
I'm sorry to see this end, it was a lovely read. I love the restrained dialogue and characterizations.

Date: 2013-01-08 11:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Oh, what a lovely thing to say! This means a lot to me. Thank you so much.

Date: 2013-01-07 12:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cuddles-and-jam.livejournal.com
This is awesome.

"What? Fake his own death?" John was shocked at the thought.
An elegant shrug. "It's been done."


D:

The texting at the end is perfect.

Date: 2013-01-08 11:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm really delighted that this worked for you.

I'm glad that exchange about Greg possibly "faking his death" struck the right note. (Augh, Sherlock!!!)

The texting at the end is perfect.

*flails* I'm so glad you liked it! You've made me a very happy camper indeed. Thank you, truly.

Date: 2013-01-07 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] capt-facepalm.livejournal.com
I am so disappointed in advance.
Moffat will not come up with anything as good as this.

Date: 2013-01-08 11:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Oh wow. *flails* Thank you for this, truly. I'm really delighted that this worked for you!

Date: 2013-01-07 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunny-rainfall.livejournal.com
brilliant and very tragic

Date: 2013-01-08 11:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much for this! I'm so glad it struck the right note. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Date: 2013-01-08 12:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ntjnke.livejournal.com
I love this. Everyone was in character, and yet you presented us with an entirely new and different plotline. Huzzah! I especially love your Mycroft. He's still a world-running bastard, but it's obvious he has his loyalties.

Thank you so much for posting!

Date: 2013-01-09 12:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
I love this. Everyone was in character, and yet you presented us with an entirely new and different plotline. Huzzah!

Oh, what a lovely thing to say! I'm soooo thrilled to hear this. Thank you.

I'm particularly happy that you liked my take on Mycroft. I find him a real challenge to write. It means a lot to hear that he still seems to be "a world-running bastard" (what a brilliant way to put it), and yet it's clear that he has his loyalties.

I'm so grateful to you for your kind and encouraging feedback. Thank you!

Date: 2013-01-08 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imbecamiel.livejournal.com
Oh, that is amazing. Well done indeed.

Date: 2013-01-09 12:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
Thanks a million for this! I really appreciate your kind words. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this.

Date: 2013-01-08 10:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ltco.livejournal.com
Oh my. And, oh My! Paternal, protective, loving Mycroft with his "allies".
I really like how you made them both (all three?) both BAMF! and vulnerable/scared. This is so well-written I got goose-bumps.

And the little bit about John having a flashback in the helicopter was just gold.

Now I know we can't just ASK for more, but if the muse finds you - I would love to read where you would take them next.

Thank you for sharing. x

Date: 2013-01-09 12:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
I really like how you made them both (all three?) both BAMF! and vulnerable/scared.

This means so much to me; it's just what I was aiming for, and I'm so grateful to hear that it worked for you.

This is so well-written I got goose-bumps.

*flails* What a lovely thing to say! Thank you, truly.

I'm also delighted to hear that the bit about John's flashback in the helicopter struck the right note.

I originally conceived of this as a one-shot story, but it's wonderful to know there's interest in more. Never say never, that's my motto! ;) So who knows... I really appreciate your encouragement.

Thank you again. You've made my day!

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Date: 2013-01-11 08:55 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] fififolle
Awww. So wonderful. Bless John, he really went through the wringer. An excellent read, very subtle and also exciting! Gorgeous. *hugs Greg* Thanks!!

Date: 2013-01-12 01:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed this! It means a lot to hear that you found it to be both subtle and exciting. Oh, how I love Lestrade; I'll hug him with you, if you don't mind. ;) Thank you for your kind words.

Date: 2013-02-10 05:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] razanurtuk.livejournal.com
I absolutely adore how you write Mycroft because you do it so perfectly. Like, it's like reading a script or something, I have his voice in my head and you word him so...perfectly. That's really the only word I have for it. I loved this.

Also, I love the epilogue - that gained a smile :)

Date: 2013-02-10 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
It thrills my heart to hear that my interpretation of Mycroft strikes the right note. I'm delighted that you can hear his voice when reading my dialogue! Thank you for this. I'm going to go dance around in glee now. :D

It's also lovely to know that you liked the epilogue, too. Thank you for your generous and encouraging feedback! I appreciate it so much.

Loved it

Date: 2013-05-29 01:01 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
For some reason, my iPad won't let me sign in properly, but it's lastwordy_mcgee. This was my first foray back into reading fic in ages, and I'm thrilled to see that you are still writing Sherlock! Brilliant and deeply emotional, as usual. So well done!!!!

Re: Loved it

Date: 2013-06-05 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morganstuart.livejournal.com
It's so wonderful to hear from you, my friend! I'm absolutely delighted to hear that you enjoyed this. I'm still a devoted Sherlock fan - I've been quiet of late because I'm working on a novel-length project - and it means a lot to me to know that this little story struck the right note. Thank you, as always, for your kind words and encouragement. You're the best!

Date: 2015-08-02 04:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fredsmith518.livejournal.com
a satisfying conclusion, thank you

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